Draft #2: Product summary and Analysis

 

The Article “Huawei P40 Pro Plus Review: Camera Tech Is A Generation Ahead “ (Forbes, June 2020) introduces the main features of Huawei P40 Pro Plus Camera Technology. The P40 Pro Plus comes with the advance feature of periscope Zoom lens together with the 80mm telephoto lens and this lens can give users the ability to zoom in to capture the moment with super clarity that a person from a far distance can be viewed so closely and tiny details can be shown with clarity. The other feature of this phone includes the ultrawide camera which provides the users with a full wide view capturing all the wide-angle details without losing the light sensitivity especially in areas where there is no light and getting clarity from such places is difficult in most cases all other phones failed at this when compared to P40 Pro plus.

The other feature of the P40 Pro Plus is the design which gives the user comfort when they are holding on to it because this design has all the side edges curved to give comfort to the hands when swiping take place and its good looking glass matte back design is the attractive part that comes in with various colors with fingerprint-resistant.

Despite having the best hardware and camera capabilities the P40 Pro plus still lacks in the software portion and it does not have a full google android service and access to the most common apps like YouTube, Chrome, Gmail, and Google maps are not available on this phone and often the third party applications like Netflix are not available in the  P40 Pro plus. This shows that Huawei has to come with its software application which can support its users with better apps compared to android service to stay completive in the market and in my opinion, one way to overcome this challenge is to develop a powerful app that can help users in their daily life in terms of communication and productivity and made it available in Huawei phones alone.

 

References

(Forbes, June 2020) “Huawei P40 Pro Plus Review: Camera Tech Is A Generation Ahead “ https://www.forbes.com/sites/bensin/2020/06/17/huawei-p40-pro-plus-review-camera-tech-is-a-generation-ahead/#33ee4cbd624b

(3G, Apr 2020) “Huawei P40 Pro review” https://3g.co.uk/reviews/huawei-p40-pro

 

Comments

  1. Badrul Ameen Bin AzaliOctober 6, 2020 at 10:59 PM

    Hi Yakuub

    It's a pleasure to be reading your summary about the new Huawei P40 Pro phone. It is an interesting write up. What I like most about your summary is that you have introduced the product very early in the summary. Also, you have highlighted the main features that stands out for the Huawei P40 Pro. However, there are certain areas that you can improve on. Areas to improve on are as follows:

    1) Paragraph one could be combined with paragraph two as both paragraphs were talking about the phone and its features. Hence, it does not have to be separated into two different paragraphs.

    2) Your thesis statement shouldn't be longer than 2-3 statements. It should be concise, but contains the controlling idea, your opinion and how does it stands out amongst its competitor.

    Other than that, the summary highlighted the main features of the phone and the idea of writing about it.

    Best Regards

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  2. Muhammad YaakubOctober 9, 2020 at 6:01 AM

    Thanks Badrul for your comments, i will improve on my product summary based on your feedback.

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